Wow, sounds like honey to my ears... :)

Very good! Full of emotion--the only thing is that you have a lot of unnecessary commas that kind of break the flow of the poem. Otherwise, good job!

I love this great job....5/5

THe commas did kind of throw me off here and there. But i do think some of them are necessary, it makes an interesting flow. I love the idea and the repetition used.

WOW!!!! I love this poem, I think it's hottt.
Wish this was happening to me.