Geez, if you thought that one was long..... just wait until I take longer than 45 minutes to write it and type another one..... told ya, I'm "wordy"!!! Thanks though! ;) ~Anita

The catacombs of the heart is a great idea for a title and I would not ask for anything more in a love poem. It has emotion sensual passion and spirituality

Nicly done =) I like it!!!!

I liked it but agree it may be too long. I would take some of the best thoughts from it and make a couple of shorter poems. I think it has potential. And as far as time goes, some of my poems even though short can take a long time to write. finding the right words can take forever to find sometimes.

I love this poem but it lacks structure and the stanzas are all diffrent lengths. amanzingly this didnt take anything away form your poem and it was great. 5/5