Wow this was beautiful. i don't think i've ever read anything like this piece. a creative write indeed. a great flow and it was very touching, and very heartfelt.

Closing her eyes to disappear; she prays her dreams will leave her there.

i loved those lines. they really caught my eye. i feel that way sometimes. i can really relate.

You couldn't feel the pain even if you tried, you couldn't feel the tears that she has cried. There is no way you could ever know how hard it was for her to let you go.

and i definately can relate to these words. so sad yet so beautiful all at the same time. i really loved your poem and can't wait to read more of your work. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.