Castles In The Sky

by FountainsOfBlood   Apr 14, 2008


It's one day in the night
Till we find there's a light
There's one night in the day
Where there's nothing left to say

To think when we die
All truths were all lies
To think we believe
There's castles in the sky

If it's all make believe
There's no life to be seized
To think we have all died
Yet no castles in the sky

A now dying sun
Brings us no return

[Meh, I wrote this in reggie today... it's crappy LOL! I might redo it when im poetical]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    The feelings are strong & the topic is great... with a little more effort it would be terrific ... But all in all its very good 5/5