Give Me My Wings

by Bugg   Apr 14, 2008


Momma and Daddy, I love you.
You guys are my whole world!
I'll always be momma's little "Kail-Bug".
And Daddy's precious little girl.

But I'm 16 now and I'm ready
To make this life my mine.
Don't worry, but I know y'all will!
I know everything will turn out fine.

Thanks for all the things you've given me.
My life hasn't been too rough.
Everything's been handed to me,
But I still think I'm pretty tough.

I know you're scared to let me go,
But I need to get away from this town.
I've always been perfect in your eyes.
I just need to get rid of this hidden frown.

I'm ready to run away from here!
But I know that will break y'all's hearts.
I don't want to do that ever;
I don't want to break them into shattered parts.

Don't worry, I'll be back soon.
I'll return as an adult, but I'll still be me.
Don't cry when I leave, I may just stay,
But I'm ready to run at the count of three.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The meter is perfect and the love expressed moved me
    VERY SWEET

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    An amazingly written piece of poetry. touching and deep. the story behind it, there is a girl is who running away so that she can finally appear as an adult in the eyes of her family, but deep down she will always be the same.

    a wonderful write and fantastic read.

    5/5

    Keep Writing, hun
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Wow...that's a nice poem, so your finally ready to accept life? that's very good.

    Don't worry, I'll be back soon.
    I'll return as an adult, but I'll still be me.
    Don't cry when I leave, I may just stay,
    But I'm ready to run at the count of three.

    My favorite stanza.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cale

    Very well written!! Nice that you wrote to your parents!!! Great work!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Aw i hope they got to read this : )
    they would have loved it
    great poem girly ! 5/5 <33