Comments : Give Me My Wings

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Aw i hope they got to read this : )
    they would have loved it
    great poem girly ! 5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Cale

    Very well written!! Nice that you wrote to your parents!!! Great work!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Wow...that's a nice poem, so your finally ready to accept life? that's very good.

    Don't worry, I'll be back soon.
    I'll return as an adult, but I'll still be me.
    Don't cry when I leave, I may just stay,
    But I'm ready to run at the count of three.

    My favorite stanza.

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    An amazingly written piece of poetry. touching and deep. the story behind it, there is a girl is who running away so that she can finally appear as an adult in the eyes of her family, but deep down she will always be the same.

    a wonderful write and fantastic read.

    5/5

    Keep Writing, hun
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The meter is perfect and the love expressed moved me
    VERY SWEET