by Shinobi
This song is written very well. The chorus was the best part. The rhymes you infused in this poem were good. The structure fit the structure of a song. The subject of this song is one many can relate to. Nice job 5/5 |
by Amber
Very Very GOOOODDDD!!!!!!!!!!!! |
VERYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDD haha i beat her! |