In the rain

by miracle   Apr 14, 2008


Shes drenched from the rain as she sits on the stone cold steps.
the rain hits her skin but feels nothing.
tears stream down her face he disappears in the distance.
she wants to run after him but her body is numb with pain.
she lives and breaths his existence.
she wishes he'd turn around and look at her if only for a instance.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    Loooved it!

  • 16 years ago

    by XxSINISTERxX

    Great poem loved it 5/5 !!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jes Miller

    Omgosh-I love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    My God...been there, hun. amazing poem...so sad...:(

    she wishes he'd turn around and look at her if only for a instance.

    ^ wow..just...very relatable.
    great job, hunny...it'll be ok..the sunshine's comin'

  • 16 years ago

    by GothChick

    Great poem...I've been there too. Hey I know a perfect song for this infact I'm listening to it now.
    "November Rain" by Guns and Roses

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