Comments : For It's All I Know

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats really powerful,

    Morning after morning, you find yourself waking up in a dark bed
    And the things you fell asleep for rush back into your head

    when i read that i smiled because i do that when i wake up!

    its really good, i liked the opening of the verses, that worked well. great poem really good work hun x