by BurriedFaceDown Apr 15, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Uncle George, why did you leave? |
by Em
This is really sad but has alot of beauty in it. 5/5, Em |
by claire
Again, this is so heartfelt, and your rhymes and rhyme sequence are really interesting. i especially love how its in conversation form - great job on this one :) |
by Gasttlee
That was so sad, but beautifully done. 5/5 |
My god.........this poem is soooo wonderful and emotional. its so amazing!! the rhyming behind it was so great! very powerful message...i smiled reading this poem. it shed light on my heart as my eyes read over the words. beautiful poem....very very beautiful |
by Blissful
Very emotional and I could tell that it came straight from the heart which made the emotions that much more real for me. It was filled with beautiful meaning and strong power that just left me deeply saddened. I am sorry for your friends loss but I'm sure you are there guiding her through this saddness. Beautifully done in creating such a wonderfully heartbreaking piece. *5/5* |