My Dying Angel

by Lemonbread   Apr 15, 2008


My weakened angel, I hold so tightly
You're life is taken oh so lightly
The sombre song you sing so sad
A time of pain was the life you had

My loving angel, I cared for so dear
Where you're going you'll have no fear
No more tears shall fall from you're eyes
No more hearts broken from all the lies

My dying angel, tonight you sleep
Tonight for you I'll silently weep
Leave you're body and forever fly
But in my heart you shall never die

TM - LiquidSugar

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lover Boii

    I really liked it, the rhyme scheme was great.

  • 16 years ago

    by broken reflection

    This poem is cliche, the meaning has been done a thousand times before and YET you've seemed to make it VERY individual. The flow was great, and wording just right!

    Again the meaning, although done time and time again before, is very special, never forgetting the ones we've lost is the greatest gift we can give them.

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    This piece was well written and it flowed together harmoniously and the rhyme was brilliant 5/5 keep writing!!

    xD Happy Thoughts xD
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~

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