Four Walls [And You]

I really liked it, the rhyme scheme was great.

I'm trying to figure out if the sadness is being felt by one person, or if the pain is felt by someone who's relationship was seemingly stolen from them from the original person.
I can't tell.
There was far more obvious rhyming here, and I liked it.

Wow! I enjoyed so much in this piece, it posses very interesting rhymes and priceless originality.
I love every line, you put so much emotions within words and expressed your self excellently with very creative metaphors.
First stanza is maybe my favorite one, it is so remarkable and I really admire your ability to write incredible thought like that one and still it was so clear and easy to read. Ending is also effective and you managed to truly touch me with whole poem.
Fantastically written.

Wow...
This is my favorite from the three of yours pieces I've read today. I am in awe, honestly impressed. Whole poem holds an amount of deep and heartfelt feelings which are expressed in excellent way. This is brilliant, so touching. Every stanza seem flawless to me and I can't find anything to critique. I re-read this three times and tried to find favorite part but every line is breathtaking and whole poem is compact and truly perfect as it is. I think that you did excellent job with rhymes, too, they're not too ordinary and basic and you created flawless flow within each stanza. Once again I wish that this piece was longer because I deeply enjoyed yet I don't think that you should change anything about it.

Keep writing!
5/5 from me

The middle stanza was my favorite
The first one was i dont know
not my favorite maybe
I'm not quite sure how sepia works?
but I dont know just my opinion
the ending was alright
not your best ending
but not your worst
nice job
5/5