by ADyingProphet Apr 15, 2008
category :
Life, society /
about society
Pollinated zephyrs dancing under |
Im speechless this poem was amazing |
by Vanessa
Your poetry is lovely and artistic... |
by kate
Love this one the way you made the words flow and the feeling so intense was absolutely wonderful...amazing |
I love the intensity and movement in this poem. Every line seems like a new scene. As a lit. student, I truly appreciate complex poetry that I can pick apart, line by line, and attempt to figure out. However, you can read all of my true feelings about this poem in my little six paragraph rant in a reply to your post on the request to read discussion board. |
This is absolutely amazing. Your choice of words is simply superb, truly stunning and I think that you portrayed the whole message of this poem excellently. You shouldn't change anything here, whole poem is brilliant. I am in awe, you truly have a way with words and your vocab is amazing. |