Set Me Free...Please!!!

by Lonely Rider   Apr 15, 2008


Dark clouds are drawing close,
dark and dreadful they are...
engulfing my wounded soul,
engulfing...through its frightening glare...
Desperate to break the bondage,
desperate to break free...
Gash... made all over,
Gash... deep inside me..
the air is suffocating,
the air...I could hardly breath,
My soul is dying,
My soul.. it hardly ever lived,
how to escape this trauma,
how.. this chapter I will tear...
ohhh...
Dark clouds are drawing close,
Dark and dreadful they are...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cara

    I realli like it. ur slight repititon is great.
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    WOW. I am impressed. Well-written. Keep it coming up..

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Nice choice of words
    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    I love the way you repeated the beginning word for 2 lines each. Though not a fan of repetition ... I really liked how this one was displayed. Very creative expression!

    Dark clouds are drawing close,
    Dark and dreadful they are...
    ^^^
    Loved this ending ....

    Very heart touching piece you've penned here
    Well done
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    You used such very provoking words, very thoughtful as well. Your choice of words were really awe-inspiring, I loved it!

    Keep writing!
    [5.5]

    Best wishes,

    Sarah

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