Comments : I need to survive

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Well written...simple and straight... I loved the 'I Will Survive' attitude...
    of course life is not a road of roses... we have to struggle hard to keep it going...
    well described here...

    good work.. keep writing..

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Another simple piece yet it is a piece that speaks nothing but the truth about life. and I admire how this poem try to encourage the readers to stand up and strife..nice work keep it up