Comments : The chosen one

  • 16 years ago

    by JAZMIN

    This poem made me imagine sitting in the place and thinking to retire... this is another great one...
    You honestly have such an awesome talent for writing...
    You have definetly become one of my favorites!
    *Jazmin*

  • 16 years ago

    by amber

    A tender piece written with much love! Most people are not one for childrens writes but i myself find them quiet innocent and sweet. Something this world is not full of these days. Great write. Keep it up!
    Thanks
    ~*~Amber~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    This is a wonderful piece.great job!5/5

    **harlea

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a beautifully written and charming piece, Michael. Great flow and great sentiment - those battery powered bears never did have quite the same charm, did they? Soulless.....
    All the very best,
    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Thanks Ben,

      I had forgotten this poem. way back in 2005. I wrote it for my son's 5th birthday and for a Bear that we had bought him. I was out shopping and we literally stumbled upon this sorry looking bear.

      Thanks for resurrecting this and him.