by JAZMIN
This poem made me imagine sitting in the place and thinking to retire... this is another great one... |
by amber
A tender piece written with much love! Most people are not one for childrens writes but i myself find them quiet innocent and sweet. Something this world is not full of these days. Great write. Keep it up! |
by X Harlea X
This is a wonderful piece.great job!5/5 |
by Ben Pickard
What a beautifully written and charming piece, Michael. Great flow and great sentiment - those battery powered bears never did have quite the same charm, did they? Soulless..... |
by Mr. Darcy
Thanks Ben, |