Dead or alive?

by Heer   Apr 15, 2008


It feels like Im dead
It feels like Ive got no more hopes, no more dreams
I feel all broken, cut into pieces, hurt, heart broken
Standing on a end where no one could ever reach or even look at me
Is this the end of the life people say its great to ? . . .
I keep telling my self its going to be ok
I bet now my heart is even fed up of hearing it

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Very good
    one suggestion
    it doesn't have a lot of closure
    maybe a little more added onto the end?
    other than that great! 5/5 <33

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