:( this poem is so beautiful...The way you expressed the feelings the message you got out to us...truly amazing. Never ever stop writing hun! :D

5/5 fabulous job!

Ah, very powerfull poem. sorry. its such a strong word. can be used meaninglessly or with great passion. you used the word with great meaning and i loved every word of your poem, great job with this. i like how short and simple and sweet your poems can be. with such meaning lying underneath. great job, looking forward to contuining to read more of your poems, love tara