Inner Demons

by Love vs Fate   Apr 15, 2008


The inner demons deep inside his soul.
What he doesn't know,
Nobody shall see.
He is a mysterious guy,
He is so good at what he does.
What people don't know,
Is that this mysterious guy is actually a killer.
As the darkness falls,
His inner demons are brought out.
His soul is so dark,
If you see him...
Don't scream.
If he find you,
You better pray he lets you live.
His inner demons are so freaky!
Run and hide,
Hide from this killer.

Hours later...

The sun starts to rise,
It appears you are safe and sound.
He never did find you,
You hid so well.
But the killer will never give up until he
finds you.
You must leave this town,
Oh before he finds you.
He will never stop chasing you,
Until he kills you.

***Dear viewers***

This poem is another one of my darkest poems that I have written. I kinda enjoyed writing it but again if you feel that you don't like it please feel free to comment and rate it. Just tell me how it made you feel, It can be good or bad...Either way I would really enjoy reading everyone's comment. There are far more talented people that have inspired me to enhance my poems with many varieties.
I hope you enjoy more and more of my poems. :D

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  • Sent shivers down my spine..

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    Great job travis

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    I lik it Travis.. vert differetn.. but me likes.. lol.. keep it up..

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Eh. Not your best. I've seen better ones. I just didn't think it was very good. To me, it sounded just like a story that you tell little kids around a campfire. It may be scary to little kids, but it is no where near a full throttle horror story. It would have been okay as a 'campfire story' if it had something to it like rhyming, or more detail, but other than that, it was far too simple. 2.

  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Travis you are truely amazing at writing poetry.keep it up!5/5
    **harlea