by Love vs Fate Apr 15, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
The inner demons deep inside his soul. |
by Diva the Chiropteran Queen and a Brokencyde and a Twilight Fan
Sent shivers down my spine.. |
Great job travis |
by Tiffany
I lik it Travis.. vert differetn.. but me likes.. lol.. keep it up.. |
Eh. Not your best. I've seen better ones. I just didn't think it was very good. To me, it sounded just like a story that you tell little kids around a campfire. It may be scary to little kids, but it is no where near a full throttle horror story. It would have been okay as a 'campfire story' if it had something to it like rhyming, or more detail, but other than that, it was far too simple. 2. |
by X Harlea X
Travis you are truely amazing at writing poetry.keep it up!5/5 |