If you changed you eyes = should be if you changed your eyes....thats the only mistake other than that it was a lovely poem.
5/5
Lovely Job!!!

Truely amazing!5/5
**harlea

It was cute. :) The idea of the poem and the setup was really cute. Other than that it didn't impress me as much as I wished it would have. It's not that there are things wrong with it, it's just I wish there was more to it. Something different. I'll give it a three.

Wow.. I love it!!!!!.. it reminds me of my Poem.. "If I"... and Justins poem.. "If You"... wow.. great job TRavis!!.. Love it!!.. 5/5..