by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Apr 15, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I wanted to put this under the Love Poems section, but it didn't seem to fit. :P |
by Andrew
This is very nice, one of the best i read. I really like your rhymin scheme and the way your poem flows. Your title is so well thought of and it fits in greatly with your poem. Good work, keep it up. |
by Mike Wilburn
Heart Forced into Slavery an appropriate name the text communicates the reluctance expressed. 5/5 |
I enjoyed this poem and it is a love poem I think a love lost poem |
by Love vs Fate
O.O I am forever speechless wit this poem...*stands up and gives a big applaud*...this poem has so many great stanza's!! you are my hero in poetry! :D TEACH ME YOUR WAYS....5/5!!! |