O.O I am forever speechless wit this poem...*stands up and gives a big applaud*...this poem has so many great stanza's!! you are my hero in poetry! :D TEACH ME YOUR WAYS....5/5!!!

I enjoyed this poem and it is a love poem I think a love lost poem

Heart Forced into Slavery an appropriate name the text communicates the reluctance expressed. 5/5

This is very nice, one of the best i read. I really like your rhymin scheme and the way your poem flows. Your title is so well thought of and it fits in greatly with your poem. Good work, keep it up.