Wow, very nicely written. I loved the choice of words you used, they painted a perfect imagery and the flow was excellent. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Excellent poem. Really liked it.
- Seemed a little dark-minded for me, well more of a sad poem, but I still enjoyed it.
Loved the rhythm and the ryhme. Well used in this poem.
- Related well - read more than once, good poem.

Keep it up <3
5/5
- Nicole xx