*hugs you so tight* I can tell that something is bothering you but you won't tell me anything... why? please... trust in me as I trust you. Please tell me what's going on... your poems... they are good, but I can sense some truth hidden in it's depths. I'm here for you.... I love you just like a sister. You really are my sister *hugs you*

Aww...i think so many girls could relate
you put so much emotion behind the words on the page
i loved it! 5/5 <33

This was a great write. very simple, and pure. i loved it. you got your message across with no hesitation. you expressed lots of emotion, amazing job. 5/5.

oh, and anime rocks!

-Ashlei.