Comments : Counting the minutes...

  • 16 years ago

    by miracle

    Amazing hun love it almost as much as i love u lol 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    That was a great poem
    good job =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Nic

    Awwwwwwwww
    i feel so loved lol
    i love you too baby
    i will always love you too;)

  • 16 years ago

    by KIARA

    This was a niced poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Brokevalentine09

    Great Poem I Love it! Keep up the great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    I think the flow is off a little but i love the meaning and the emotion put into the words.

    the different lengths of the stanzas through it off a little but not that much.

    i really do like it and give it a 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    Would never violate you in any way
    i would never look you in the eyes and lie
    i would never stab you in the back
    i would never just tell you good bye

    this was sooooo cute

    overall it was great

  • 16 years ago

    by LOVEmeNOT

    Aww. I think this poem is really cute. I love it.
    You can really see how you feel about this person and its also telling a story. I like how it all flowed.
    It was well done. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    WOW you really must liked this person. any way liked the poem.=)

  • 16 years ago

    by emiley

    Wow i love this poem! i understand it to! lol. its great please keep writing your a great poet. and you have great detail!! keep up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by always the same

    Amazing poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cross

    Really well done i can see how much u lovr that person :P

  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Amazing poem.5/5
    **harlea

  • 16 years ago

    by Nawa

    "I treasure you more than anything,
    you're my one and only true love.
    I will never let you go or leave your side.
    I just know you're a gift from up above."
    awww thats soo cuute. Lovely poem, great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    I treasure you more than anything,
    you're my one and only true love.
    I will never let you go or leave your side.
    I just know you're a gift from up above.

    i love that part is so sweet and well written.
    I really like your poems. Keep it up girl!

    atomatic 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blah Blah Blahhhh

    Awww..thz is really sweet..and i can relate to it.. i like it..:]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I agree with you babe girls usuually use that word when they are jealous of the girl
    5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Awhh this was so sweet! very expressive and heartfelt. i loved how you just poured out your feelings. wonderful!

    But until then I just want you to remember,
    that I miss you more each moment and
    I will always be waiting, no matter how long, for you.
    Know that I love you in a way no one will ever understand.

    i loved that stanza the most especially the last line, quite creative. this was a very meaningful poem and dedication. i loved it. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    It would never even cross my mind to use you,
    not for your money or for your looks.
    Thats something that just crosses so many lines,
    something that should be taken out of any play book.

    ^^^This is a major part of a lot of romances between young people and it is so wrong.
    I am glad you made a poem about this, Tabi.
    It is important that young people read this and it hopefully will make them think!
    A good poem with an important message!

    Take care!

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Oh, I forgot..I gave you a 5/5!