That is so sweet, and beautiful.
I really like your poem, keep up the
great work, fantastic job, 5/5, no doubt.

-mandy :)

This is almost like a song. lol but i still like it. wonderful poem i like the format and everything. keep writing.

Sweet young love is a treasure to keep. may those arms that hold you bring you many more sweet moments to remember, good write, I liked it.

That was wonderful and so sweet....really just magical....= )

Beautiful ... Simply beautiful 5/5

Cute poem i love it!!

Lovely poem!

Awwe Aly this is brilliant sooooo cute.
:)
this poem makes me feel hopeful, about love in general.
beautifully done as always Aly
:)

-Brittany V.

This was very beauitful.
amazing job.
yer a lovely writer.
keep up the good work!

Beautiful poem...5/5 im still have came in contact with that special person at least i dont think i have but u never no...

Excellent,
so beautiful.

Such a cute poem. It made me remember all the good times I had with my first love. Great job getting the emotions out.

I love this, it's brilliant i must say.
you're a real natural and the emotions were very simple and well displayed in the poem :)
5/5, keep it up.