Open my grave

by dawny   Apr 16, 2008


Open my grave
and let the sun shine in
i am just a lost soul
help me to grow
show me the way
the way to your heart
oh cant you see how im dying
ive got no reason to be proud
drink this water around me
before i drown.

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  • 15 years ago

    by InvisibleManiac

    Well sadly it's not even there work, it's lyrics from a song called lost soul by the band negative

  • 16 years ago

    by Phoenix

    This is pretty good, it does seem to need a little work but as an unfinished work, I think it an amazing start. (By the way I hate this type of comment as much as anyone else. No one likes to hear that their work isn't as good as it could be. So sorry.) But yeah, all I'm saying is that with a little more work this would be even better.

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