This is pretty good, it does seem to need a little work but as an unfinished work, I think it an amazing start. (By the way I hate this type of comment as much as anyone else. No one likes to hear that their work isn't as good as it could be. So sorry.) But yeah, all I'm saying is that with a little more work this would be even better.

Well sadly it's not even there work, it's lyrics from a song called lost soul by the band negative