To be with him

by holly   Apr 16, 2008


She's only 14
but she doesnt want to wait
this stubborn teenage girl
believes that this is fate

she wants nothing more
than to be his wife
to care for him forever
he is her entire life

everynight she dreams of him
and how their life will be
the funny thing about this is
the teenage girl is...me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Well its a cute poem, but it has a lot of mistakes...
    "he is he entire life"
    ^^ he is her entire life..change he to her..the second he ;)

    "the funny this about this is"
    ^^ the funny thing about this is
    .........change the first this to thing..

    "the teenage girl is...me "
    ^^ i think it'd have a more powerfull efect if you said "that teengage girl is...me."

    just some suggestions...
    Aly

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