by xXxemzxXx Apr 16, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Heres the feelings i have kept confined |
by Lady Nik
It's nice to read a love poem from you. You seem so sad, but this is so fresh and full of life and meaning. Very lovely poem my friend. Keep on writing. Nik |
I can definately relate to the love and emotion in this poem, it really touches home. Excellent description and heart throughout, most teenagers can relate to this and most adults who have been in love. Amazing job 5/5 GG23 |
Nice, i like it... ahaha.. can you read mine? just click my name above.. tnx.. |
Great message and some well worded phrases. Doesnt flow well. 4/5. |