Great message and some well worded phrases. Doesnt flow well. 4/5.

Nice, i like it... ahaha.. can you read mine? just click my name above.. tnx..

I can definately relate to the love and emotion in this poem, it really touches home. Excellent description and heart throughout, most teenagers can relate to this and most adults who have been in love. Amazing job 5/5 GG23

It's nice to read a love poem from you. You seem so sad, but this is so fresh and full of life and meaning. Very lovely poem my friend. Keep on writing. Nik