Hey this poem is very good..and i know the feelings of that kin of stuff. good poem though. you are a good writer...keep it up..thanks for the comment..
Crystal

Haha i really liked this! It was a great read! You got some serious talent! 5/5!

Great poem i like how you described both parts and the ending is funny yet powerful... one of my faves...

I like this poem of you so cute!
i give you 5/5 for a good work!

and thanks for the comments!
god bless u!