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by Sarah
Great acrostic poem, very nice.. [5.5] Best wishes, Sarah
by Cyma Khan
Beautiful Poem, Good job. 5/5
by Poet on the Piano
"Can you smell it? A soft sweet aroma" I liked how you started this with a question, though the second line was a bit cliche. "soft sweet aroma" was just not the most creative line."Nature has brought; The best I must admit. A real delicious treat, Like everything ought." This is such a interesting poem, great job so far, this really made me smile!"Oh what a wonderful smell, Up in the warm sunny air. People are missing out on, Every cantaloupe which I have sought." You repeated "sought" and that kind of ruined it for me. Otherwise, a cute topic, which showed of just how unique you are, in writing. 4/5 from me, take care ~MaryAnne