I love this

Heyyyyy who ever you are =]
i really liked the symilie in the first paragraph
geeze kat i didnt know you were this goood of a poet...good job kid =]]
5/5 btw

I like the last paragraph and it show everything to make sense and u did pretty good. 5/5!

You have floored me again and I enjoyed the landing. I would do it again, I love your style of writing and the way your poets pen etches the page with such raw and natural emotion. I think you have found a fan of your poetry. Bravo

Ahh, Questions I see. This poem has a ton of meaning behind it. I liked this poem a lot. 5/5 once again!