Daddy's Wise Words

by munkee04   Apr 16, 2008


Daddy once told me
Not to drink and drive,
If I would've listened
That kid would still be alive.

If only I had listened
I would've seen that kid,
As he walked across the street
Playing around like he always did.

It wasn't night yet
But still I didn't see him,
For I was drunk
And that caused me to hit him.

Instead of being at his funeral
They have sent me to jail,
For I was drunk when I hit him
And that's all I can tell.

I've made prayers to God
To get me out of this place,
But I don't think he'll listen
For I am only a disgrace.

I haven't seen my Daddy
And I miss him a lot,
If only I had listened to him
I wouldn't have gotten caught.

I would've been with him now
Having fun at the lake,
But I had to screw things up
It was ALL a BIG MISTAKE!!!.

This is my very first myself written poem...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Perfectly Broken

    For a first written poem, it was pretty good/decent. but the flow was off here and there and i think you used the word "for" too much. threw me off a little. but i like the idea of the poem and the wayy you worded things, beside the "for" parts. very sad, i could feel the emotions. it was deep.

  • 16 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Dam that was very very good reminded me of my cousin who died two years ago he was drinking and driving and wrecked but that was an amazing poem you need to write some more like this one it was very good 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    This poem was very very very sad but very deep it had a great tone to it! I could picture the scenery in this poem as if it had happened to me! For this being your first written poem you rocked out!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sammerz

    Awwww.....that is really sad...but you did one heck of a good jjob this poem is filled wit emotions.
    5/5
    Fantastic Job!!!

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