Awwww.....that is really sad...but you did one heck of a good jjob this poem is filled wit emotions.
5/5
Fantastic Job!!!

This poem was very very very sad but very deep it had a great tone to it! I could picture the scenery in this poem as if it had happened to me! For this being your first written poem you rocked out!

Dam that was very very good reminded me of my cousin who died two years ago he was drinking and driving and wrecked but that was an amazing poem you need to write some more like this one it was very good 5/5

For a first written poem, it was pretty good/decent. but the flow was off here and there and i think you used the word "for" too much. threw me off a little. but i like the idea of the poem and the wayy you worded things, beside the "for" parts. very sad, i could feel the emotions. it was deep.