by munkee04 Apr 16, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Where are you my love? |
Not bad it would be great if you had more rythm in it overall it was good had alot of emotion in it |
It was a great poem, but to tell the truth I didn't like it.....i mean it wasn't really my vibe........i just couldn't get into to it......it was very long......great poem.....just not my style! |