Wow that wuz great
i loved it
5/5
its true... all of it

-halie

A great poem with sincere feelings and perfect rythm and rhyme. Loved it and enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing it.

As long as you arent that sad goodbye.
i think it'll be okay.
this is a great poem and so so true!

<3
XxAshleyxX

This is so true...the rhythm isnt that great but I see what you're getting at....great write! ^_^ 4/5

Courtney this poem is sad but yet it has a message in it. A message of a little girl crying out, I take it this girl is you. You're crying out in fear and pain, Wanting someone to come save you. I am here to be that someone, I am hoping you'll let me into your kingdom of love and happiness.
I will brighten each thought and dream of yours. I will be your protector as I once was.
You once protected me from the bad, Now I must do the same for you my dearest friend.
Courtney, You have many people in this world that you must meet. There are others like me waiting out there, Waiting for you to discover.
Their hoping and praying that one day they'll meet a girl like you, Trust me...I once did and now I have met you. The nicest girl I could meet. I don't want you to ever forget that Courtney Holland, You'll a very strong girl...
You may be going through battles in life, But soon you will unlock your future. It just takes time. Many battles have you won already, Just need to fight the inner battle with yourself. I am here for you always and forever.

love,

Travis Lurz
aka
XxEmoxChildxX

Sad poem, but balanced by the positive aspects..
Almost like life.
Your message is that.

good job 5/5

Great,well written poem.I love it.Keep it up,dont let it get you down.Just remember I'm here for you,if you ever need anything,or any help!!Im a friend,of whoever wants to be my friend,and whoever accepts me for who I am.Im not a hater,unless they hate me.Even then I try to do the bets that I can!Well written.
5/5

Jessica
xx