by AllHailTheHeartbreaker Apr 16, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
[Song? Poem?] |
by Haleigh
This seems more of a song than a poem. You sound like you really want to help this person and save them maybe? the only complaint i have is the amount of times you say feedback. It could be a positive thing though underlining that the feedback is what is hurting your friend? Im not too sure. I like the last stanza the most it shows how strongly you want to help. 5/5 |