Now i so plainly see

by she   Apr 17, 2008


The memories of what he did,
Confine me in this prison,
Some call a mind.
Those cutting words are what still haunt me in an act
Many call self-harm,
But I call simply self-repair.
I vowed that never again,
Would a man control me,
But now I so plainly see,
Through this blade,
He has me, my will, my body, my life,
Only worse,
This time I gave it to him!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Strong poem, keep it up x

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Though I cannot directly relate to this..i understand what it means to be controlled, manipulated by somebody you trust...and so i can relate to this poem in one way or another. and i loved it. it's so sad...such a vicious cycle...how we allow them to control us even when they aren't around..*hugs*

    Those cutting words are what still haunt me in an act
    Many call self-harm,
    But I call simply self-repair.

    ^ most relatable part to me....cutting words, it makes me think of a girl at school who used to be a good friend of mine..and now kills me with words and looks every day. and "self repair"....it feels like self preservation, i understand that.

    great job, hun. PM me if you need to talk about ANYTHING.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Very nice work, I can completely relate to this realization and think you captured it fantastically. The ending is my favorite part, I wasn't sure when I first read teh title, but I was pleasantly surprised. Good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww hun. :(

    keep writing xxxxxx