Wow...that was an amazing poem, full of emotion and feeling. I love it.

Oh my..... I can taste the venom from here... halfway across the world from you dear!!! Beautifully written, and controlled given the circumstances. I love the flow, and the determination of the true underlying plot as well as the careful choice of words as not to be too offensive or hurtful, simply heartfelt, and meaningful. I am encouraged to read more of them... not a norm for me... great work, best wishes! ~Anita

I absolutely love the meaning you put into this poem. it is very strong and flows nicely.

i dont really feel much emotion comming out of it though. maby it is just me but it does not reach out to me.

it ryhmed very well and had comparisons i have yet to see in poetry.

it was very well written . 4/5
i cant call it excellent because i didnt feel the emotion but it was a great read and if i could i would give it a 4.9 but it is not a choice. =)

Very very very nice =] im not sure if it would be under love though maybe under loss relationship under sad
but its just a suggestion
=] that was deffinately very heartfelt and i know you meant it