Wow! You truly know to write different styles of poetry and here you showed your great ability to write touching love poem. I am honestly amazed with this piece, you expressed each emotion with such freedom within words. Your love poetry is one of the most original love poetry I ever read, it is so descriptive and refreshing, you really know how to express deep feelings without using some cliche. I enjoyed a lot in this one, ending line is so effective and you created intense atmosphere through whole poem. I am mesmerized with few lines, you said so much with three stanzas and your choice of words is excellent too. I can't pick one favorite stanza because I love every part of this poem equally.
Overall bravo!

Truth be told, I'm not a fan of love poems as they always end up cliche at least in the majority of the poem itself. You have a lot of interesting description, sadly it runs dry as the line progresses until the end of the sentence:

Rose petals hold no beauty next to your tranquil eyes,

By the time I reached the word your, I was already convinced that this was a poem written to someone or from the point of a love struck teen, and I think it could have been handled a bit better. With poems you should remember that as you write, you learn, y ou pick up a few tips, so here are a few suggestions, take what you want, leave what you like:

Avoid some filler words: I [don't poke an eye iwht too many I's], She/He [Once we learn taht this was written to someone, it can be repeated maybe once, but after that you are reminding the reader this, and it helps lose focus.] the/and [Use these sparingly, yet do not limit yourself to fully avoiding them.] my and so forth [Again just shoves it into the reader's mind]

Warming my heart strings like the heat of a wood fire,

You could extend on some lines such as these, I think this stanza where this line came from gave you your most unique part. What about the flame of passion dancing, or the tingling of palm on hand, or the crackling of a newborn love such as the cry of a new life.

The atmosphere becomes calm and you whisper into my ear,

You're directing now, this is why it sounds like a narrative story. What about: The atmosphere becomes calm; a whisper in my ear. With this example, you stop directing from that invisible director's chair and the action can flow into the next such as a wave in a sea.

Ooh, beautiful. I really liked the last stanza. It felt more like a song to me though, than a poem. Dunno why. I didn't really like the flow of this poem. I thought the lines were a little long, but they were very pretty with all the words you used.

Wow
the vocabulary to this piece was just amazing!
I really enjoyed reading that
I love new words!
Your poem created a vivid image
I thought that every reader could connect with
Even though it was short
it still held all of the emotions that a longer one could have
nice job
5.5

I knew from the first line that this would be a beautiful heartwarming piece, and I was right.
The descriptions of your love in such various ways throughout this piece are stunning, and sometimes cliche, but it didn't annoy me in this. You mix it up between your unique lines, I think that's why it's just so good.
Your flow, as always is great, and you ended this with a classic feel and a touch of your own. I can't say much more about this piece, because it is just gorgeous the way it is; filled with love. It makes me smile. :]

Tammie xo

Wow...
This poem holds indescribable beauty. I am speechless in a way.
You ability to portray emotions on such superb way is impressive. I could actually feel everything that you described through amazing pictures painted with words. Whole atmosphere of this piece brought me to another world and made me smile. Every line of the poem is equally captivating and touching. Your detailed imagery added intensity to the every expressed emotion.

My favorite stanza is:

- The atmosphere becomes calm and you whisper into my ear,
I'm lost within the voices of sweet nothings you have said,
Winter, Autumn, Summer, Spring shall this love forever go on,
For Aphrodite has spread her wings and sparkled light on us.-
^^^
Deeply touching and truly outstanding stanza. The ending with the Greek goddess is absolutely brilliant. I also like the fact that this write has elements of nature poem.

Keep up!
5/5

Oh I really liked how you put a greek goddess into this. That was very creative.
It brings more beauty into the poem by having something considered one of the most beautiful things in it. I liked that.
I also liked how you used your words to explain everything. Without rhyme, it still flowed flawlessly.
5/5

I have to say, this seems passionately written.
The beauty of the piece is not evident and thus the old saying is true here:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
In this case, the reader.
This reader for one, found it beautiful.

Ahh its so beautiful for me read such an amazing love poem by you because its usually dark. Oh my hun I just adored this piece and I have no idea where to begin ...

1st Stanza:
Beautiful opening eye. I could imagine everything so nicely in this stanza which delighted my eyes and spread a smile upon my lips.

"Unlike my favorite flower our love shall always bloom,"
^Loved this line. So unique and filled with such endless beauty that it blew me away.

2nd Stanza:
I didn't like your use of the word "arteries" I feel as if you created such a blissful atmosphore and that word sounded harsh when I read it out loud. Aside from that this was my fave stanza because you described everything so flawlessly. The imagery here blew me away.

3rd Stanza:
Your last line ... oh my it just left me in awe. You always know how to end poems with a bang and leave me wanting more and this was no exception. The wording was just amazing and the flow you created .. flawless.

Amazing piece my dear.
*5/5*