"The bitter truth is death itself
yet you put a mask of hatred on
Learn to love for life comes just once
Opportunities too are provided, not often, not often"
Love this last stanza. A marvellous, excellent poem. You have put a lot of thoughts and ideas in it.
What a lovely ,heart touching poem.I too exspecially liked that last verse.Excellent job ,well done !
16 years ago
by mandy
"A drop of tear hidden
Behind it lies a ocean
You dare to swim your way out
You survive, Not often, not often."
I love every stanza but this has to be my favorite. Wise words and wonderfuly written. Very beautiful poem, it hold much meaning. I love it, great job. 5/5.