Comments : Not Often...

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    "The bitter truth is death itself
    yet you put a mask of hatred on
    Learn to love for life comes just once
    Opportunities too are provided, not often, not often"

    Love this last stanza. A marvellous, excellent poem. You have put a lot of thoughts and ideas in it.

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    What a lovely ,heart touching poem.I too exspecially liked that last verse.Excellent job ,well done !

  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    "A drop of tear hidden
    Behind it lies a ocean
    You dare to swim your way out
    You survive, Not often, not often."

    I love every stanza but this has to be my favorite. Wise words and wonderfuly written. Very beautiful poem, it hold much meaning. I love it, great job. 5/5.

    -mandy :)