Silent symphony

by Ares   Apr 17, 2008


We're swirling,
through the open landscapes in the universe,
the stars moan and laugh,
as our skin grazes theirs.

I'm happy and I think it shows,
we've been lying here for too long,
but I wouldn't change anything,
because the beauty in your eyes,
tells me who I really am.

as our naked bodies blend in to,
a silent symphony of love, sweat and lust,
I begin to feel as if all the questions I've asked,
are answered.

the answer is so bloody simple,
the answer is you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Likedudeits Hayley

    I really like this, it's a really relatable topic.
    You've expressed it well.

  • 16 years ago

    by Allison

    Wow, its so beautiful. I love it!!! *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Lover Boii

    I really liked it, the rhyme scheme was great.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    WOWOWOW. This is another brilliant, amazing poem from you. I rather enjoy this one. Beautiful imagery and symbolism, just a masterpiece.
    Just one thing to fix--no comma is needed after you say 'to'. Other than that, fab. You deserve more than a five...

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Hey, beautiful and romantic poem... Just what I was missing... I asked myself a question...And I think I got an answer...It is you... :P

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