Wow, greatly written for first haiku, so descriptive for such a short poem...
I enjoyed in this, it is truly refreshing and vivid, the fact that you managed to create so colorful picture with just few words honestly amazed me.
You somehow captured real spirit of haiku poetry here, bravo, truly well done!

Excellent first Haiku you've penned here. You have painted a lovely picture within such few words.
Beautifully done
Luanne

If this is yours first...i must say you are very talented...

I adore haiku's and this is as good as anything I've read. Particularly good for a first attempt, well done.