Aint ready to climb

This was very beautifully written. With few words you could make your readers feel so much. I loved the strong ending. 5/5

You left this house and expected
Not to leave your foot prints behind
Well I guess you were wrong
Coz your always on my mind

That is an amazing way to open it. very ell done. I especially like the metaphore of the footprints in the snow. Really well done.

5/5

Well done

your poem contained deep and true feelings
i like it

my favorite part
"I dread coming home coz the emptiness is true
It reminds me of why I always loved you"

Poems is good in few lines. i didn't really like all the lines. overall it's... more than okay...

Very nice & sweet poem ... touchy & sad 5/5