Aint ready to climb

by Cara   Apr 17, 2008


You left this house and expected
Not to leave your foot prints behind
Well I guess you were wrong
Coz your always on my mind

I dread coming home coz the emptiness is true
It reminds me of why I always loved you

The house is so numb without you by my side
I miss you, tears of sadness I have cried

They say healing takes time
Well I aint ready to climb
The mountain to forgiveness.

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  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    This was very beautifully written. With few words you could make your readers feel so much. I loved the strong ending. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    You left this house and expected
    Not to leave your foot prints behind
    Well I guess you were wrong
    Coz your always on my mind

    That is an amazing way to open it. very ell done. I especially like the metaphore of the footprints in the snow. Really well done.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Well done

    your poem contained deep and true feelings
    i like it

    my favorite part
    "I dread coming home coz the emptiness is true
    It reminds me of why I always loved you"

  • 16 years ago

    by Aryaan

    Poems is good in few lines. i didn't really like all the lines. overall it's... more than okay...

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Very nice & sweet poem ... touchy & sad 5/5

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