Comments : Aint ready to climb

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Nice poem
    loved the meaning of the mountain of forgiveness.
    gd job

    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautiful poem..
    "They say healing takes time
    Well I aint ready to climb
    The mountain to forgiveness. "
    ^^ really liked this last stanza... good imagination... great work...
    keep up...

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole the Fairy

    No point in saying "good poem" because these words don't mean much to a poet.
    I would like to write that;
    This poem is a true poem which really has a meaning and a theme. Wasn't a boring poem, and it kept me reading from the first line to the last.
    Brilliant. Excellent. Spectacular.
    These are words which would mean alot to a poet.
    Loved the way that each stanza was a little different - i.e., you had 4 lines in the first two, then 2 lines for the next two, and to finish the poem off nicely, 3 lines.
    Very well done.
    Loved it.
    Definately 5/5 - can't wait to read your other poems <3

    - Nicole xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    "You left this house and expected
    Not to leave your foot prints behind"

    I like your start, its powerful.

    "I dread coming home coz the emptiness is true
    It reminds me of why I always loved you"

    I can really relate to this, I understand this. I think many other readers can as well.

    "The house is so numb without you by my side
    I miss you, tears of sadness I have cried"

    My favorite line in the poem. Its so emotional I love it.

    "They say healing takes time
    Well I aint ready to climb
    The mountain to forgiveness. "

    So true, so honest. I like this poem. Keep up the good work, your doing great! I enjoyed reading this. You should check out some of mine sometime. :D :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Very nice & sweet poem ... touchy & sad 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Aryaan

    Poems is good in few lines. i didn't really like all the lines. overall it's... more than okay...

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Well done

    your poem contained deep and true feelings
    i like it

    my favorite part
    "I dread coming home coz the emptiness is true
    It reminds me of why I always loved you"

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    You left this house and expected
    Not to leave your foot prints behind
    Well I guess you were wrong
    Coz your always on my mind

    That is an amazing way to open it. very ell done. I especially like the metaphore of the footprints in the snow. Really well done.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    This was very beautifully written. With few words you could make your readers feel so much. I loved the strong ending. 5/5