Nice poem
loved the meaning of the mountain of forgiveness.
gd job

xx

Beautiful poem..
"They say healing takes time
Well I aint ready to climb
The mountain to forgiveness. "
^^ really liked this last stanza... good imagination... great work...
keep up...

No point in saying "good poem" because these words don't mean much to a poet.
I would like to write that;
This poem is a true poem which really has a meaning and a theme. Wasn't a boring poem, and it kept me reading from the first line to the last.
Brilliant. Excellent. Spectacular.
These are words which would mean alot to a poet.
Loved the way that each stanza was a little different - i.e., you had 4 lines in the first two, then 2 lines for the next two, and to finish the poem off nicely, 3 lines.
Very well done.
Loved it.
Definately 5/5 - can't wait to read your other poems <3

- Nicole xx

"You left this house and expected
Not to leave your foot prints behind"

I like your start, its powerful.

"I dread coming home coz the emptiness is true
It reminds me of why I always loved you"

I can really relate to this, I understand this. I think many other readers can as well.

"The house is so numb without you by my side
I miss you, tears of sadness I have cried"

My favorite line in the poem. Its so emotional I love it.

"They say healing takes time
Well I aint ready to climb
The mountain to forgiveness. "

So true, so honest. I like this poem. Keep up the good work, your doing great! I enjoyed reading this. You should check out some of mine sometime. :D :D

Very nice & sweet poem ... touchy & sad 5/5

Poems is good in few lines. i didn't really like all the lines. overall it's... more than okay...

Well done

your poem contained deep and true feelings
i like it

my favorite part
"I dread coming home coz the emptiness is true
It reminds me of why I always loved you"

You left this house and expected
Not to leave your foot prints behind
Well I guess you were wrong
Coz your always on my mind

That is an amazing way to open it. very ell done. I especially like the metaphore of the footprints in the snow. Really well done.

5/5

This was very beautifully written. With few words you could make your readers feel so much. I loved the strong ending. 5/5