Adios my Love

by Janalicious14   Apr 17, 2008


(In a far away island, there was a lost girl, struggling for her life...)

girl:
As I stand here alone
In the banks of the sea
waiting for that someone
I guess he had flee

He left me alone
On this island of no where
Where my mind is blown
and floating there somewhere

As I watch him leave
I could hardly breath
For he will be gone
I'm left here undone

The waves are so strong
while my heart is so weak
now that he's gone
I coud not speak

As I hurt here alone
I came to think
maybe he don't love me
as I used to know

As I slowly die
of depression and hurt
I only think of you
until He takes my breath away

Honey, I love you
Until the very end
Even you left me
I kiss for you I'll send

"Adios my love"

(then the girl died)

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  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Nice poem.. you keep the flow of each line run smoothly through our mind and created a gloomy ambiance on my part 'coz i myself have experience such pain. good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Love can be quite a horrid thing i know the pain