Rain Drop

That was totally awesome. I like how you personified the raindrop. It is like the whole life history of that rain drop from start to finish with beautiful emotional emphasis. To me it states how precious life is. So the fourth line is my favorite of the poem. One could almost postulat how the rain drop got wet from how it got dry.

Very interesting piece, I love it. Greatly written with so unique and vivid description of nature. I like how you ended this poem, very effective for a nature piece. Anyway you managed to create excellent imagery with just few lines which is amazing, also I like shape of this piece, it has somehow broken lines which helped you to make even more powerful atmosphere.
Overall I enjoyed very much, nicely done.

Good poem.
Is there a structure?
Just asking.
5/5