A LIFE YOU CANT TAKE...

by Ariana Mejia   Apr 17, 2008


Blood is just a way of life,
but its hard to cover when you use the knife.
long sleeve shirts that cover your arm,
nobody knows your doing this harm.
walking alone down the hall,
just hoping you wont break and fall.
your late to class from slitting in the bathroom,
your wishing you were already in your tomb.
the school day is over and you go home,
its no different your still alone.
you write a poem or go to sleep,
you drown in your dreams so deep.
just hoping that you will never awake,
for this life is something you cant take.
tomorrow comes and you arise,
just to hear people tell their lies.
as the day goes by you want to get away,
you go home and the bathroom floor is where you lay.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

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  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    This poem really blew me away, i really really liked it. It really flows well and the message behind it is very solid. Nice work just hope you could forget some of your pain and be happy. Good work, really loved it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I really enjoyed reading this poem, great job
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  • 16 years ago

    by Lacie

    Good job, nice poem, nice poet, keep up the good work, perfecly spoken, and perfectly wrote,

    [~lacie~] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CrossCut

    This poem is asolutely amazing. to me. I can relate to this poem becuase I have felt this exact way. Kudos. 5/5

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